creatures/BE_0003_S1_naga_tana_of_the_wae.md
CANON SUBORDINATION — this document is PROPOSAL-TIER: it serves canon and never outranks it.
The canon: the CVD · the T1 foundation docs · the T0 registries (registries/) · the spine
(docs/spine/CH_*.md) · the region pages (_source/02_Tier_2_Region_Pages/). Authority order:docs/DOC_MAP.md§ 0.
Canon served (scanned from this document's own citations — widen it by hand where it is thin):
T0_Boss_Attack_Rail·T0_Boss_Encounter_Registry·T0_Creature_Roster·T0_Environment_Grammar_Registry·docs/spine/CH_03.md·_source/02_Tier_2_Region_Pages/flores_island.md
READ THAT CANON FIRST — open it and derive from it before you build anything from this document.
If this document disagrees with canon, CANON WINS and this document is the defect — fix the
document, never the canon. Nothing here is applied until it is ratified into canon.
STATUS: PROPOSAL-TIER design sheet. The BODY is designed on CR_0002_naga_tana_water_aspect.md; this
sheet designs the ENCOUNTER, and it is the row where the phrase "mythologically-stylized when roused"
is actually cashed.
python) · display_name "the naga that keeps the spring"
pocket)
puzzle_routed=violation_read · environmental=coil_strike_pausenot slain because the ngoéng de tana land-contract IS the resolution — the Manggarai rite states the
constraint in its own voice and the encounter RESTORES the community's rite rather than removing a
creature [SRC_00469; SRC_00203]
CR_0002_naga_tana_water_aspect.mdT0_Boss_Encounter_Registry @ BE_0003_S1 · T0_Creature_Roster @ CR_0002 · docs/spine/CH_03.md § the ngoéng de tana beats · flores_island.md § 5
CR_0002, the same animal the player met at Ch 2 — and the encounter's design depends on the player
KNOWING it is the same animal. Full skeleton, ROM and material on the body sheet.
must be asked through the ngoéng-de-tana ritual contract — what the land wants — before the land is
used; violate the contract and THE GUARDIAN IS ROUSED [SRC_00469].
least one, so the wae guardian is a guardian holding its own contract, appeased and never slain
[SRC_00469].
at fields, forests and water sources, who tell the people where a rite may be held at all, which is
the reason a ritual has a correct PLACE and not merely a correct form [SRC_00203].
forest until the rite of reconciliation is performed [SRC_00469] — and the region page states the
child is recovered unharmed in every branch.
THE ROUSING IS THE ELEVATION, AND IT IS THE WHOLE POINT OF THIS ROW. CR_0002's row says
mythologically-stylized WHEN ROUSED, which means the Ch-2 animal and the Ch-3 animal are the same body
in two states, and the player has already met the first one. That prior meeting is what makes the
second one land, and no other pair in the slice has that structure.
WHAT ROUSED LOOKS LIKE, spending defender_element Earth entirely on world response, with no emission
anywhere — because Earth is not one of the three emitting families:
body rather than a wind. Dry cracks open in the mud along the arc the body has just left, and close
again as it passes back.
it pauses. The player can read the encounter's state IN THE WATER THEY CAME FOR, which is the exact
thing the beat is about.
and the design's rule is that it never becomes a voice and never becomes a roar. This being does
not perform.
animal's forward third does not slide over the ground, it holds it, which is why the coil can anchor
without a rock and why the arc closes faster here than it did at the waterfall.
MECHANISM: the contract is real and the land is a party to it. Vril alters real physics rather than
suspending it, and a guardian holding a violated ngoéng-de-tana is a body the ground is currently
acting through. That is stated once, shown continuously, and never explained to the player.
ONE-LINE ENCOUNTER READ: the same snake the player already met, with the ground moving when it moves
and the spring running brown while it is angry.
body, different ground behaviour, which is exactly the "one animal, two states" requirement.
the body's own segment positions, so a player can see which part of the animal the ground is
answering. An effect that plays on a timer instead of on the body would make this a cutscene.
THE VERBS ARE ATTUNE AND PERCEIVE, AND THIS SHEET DOES NOT SMUGGLE COMBAT INTO THEM. There is no
primary_verb here that means strike, and the encounter is a contract restored rather than an animal
reduced.
| tell shape | body origin | one answer | counter class |
|---|---|---|---|
| the held rousing | the forebody is up and the epaxial ridge stays loaded without releasing | wait — this is not an attack, it is a state | read |
| the unload | the ridge goes slack from the head backward and the litter settles | THIS is the pause; attune the breath here — the row's own first counter | the puzzle lane |
| the coil-strike | the ridge fires and the arc closes; the row names it coil_strike_pause | give the ground, do not fill it | environmental |
| the violation showing | the seamed section carries what was done: fresh sap in the scale seams where timber was cut, silt in the ventral crust where the spring was fouled | READ IT — this is the row's own violation_read, and it is what tells the player which contract to offer | the puzzle lane |
THE PERCEIVE VERB HAS A BODY, AND THAT IS THIS SHEET'S CONTRIBUTION. secondary_verb is perceive and
the row's counter is to perceive the specific violation to know the contract to offer — which in a
lesser design is a dialogue check. Here it is anatomical: the animal is half made of the ground that
was violated, so the ground's injury is ON IT, and the player reads the offence off the guardian's own
body. Sap means timber. Silt means water. Ash means fire. One creature, one look, one correct rite.
ESCALATION, four channels: POSTURE — the forebody rises and STAYS, which at Ch 2 it did only in
flashes. BREATH — the whole-body cycle stops being a rest rhythm and becomes a hold. VOCALIZATION —
the ground's register under the exhalation. NEW OPENER — the held rousing replaces the slack coil as
the state it returns to.
THE RESOLUTION IS A RITE, NOT A DAMAGE THRESHOLD. Win: the guardian withdraws, the contract is
restored, and the first ritual-botanical gather node opens. Loss: the waterfall ritual completes at a
partial-success ceiling and the strike cadence is logged — a graduated consequence, no dead end.
possible form of §17.1 in a boss row: the encounter RESTORES a living community's practice, and the
community is neither the target nor the obstacle.
the warrant is a cited exemption on the row rather than a lane's preference. Note the asymmetry with
Ch 2 and keep it: at Ch 2 the same animal CAN be fought down for a lore mark, and at Ch 3 the
encounter's whole shape is the rite. Same animal, two encounters, two permissions — because the
contract is what changed, not the creature.
template.
enough to feel like a boss — bigger, louder, a rear-up and a roar. REFUSED, and the refusal is the
interesting one: this being does not perform, and a naga tana that roars is a Hollywood monster
wearing a Manggarai name. The ground moving is more frightening and it is the tradition's own
register. The devil's-advocate check against over-conservatism was also run: is a non-combat verb
pair a defang? No — the pips are five, a mistake wipes the chain, and the reveal threshold is 1.0,
so the difficulty is visible from the first second and the encounter is harder than the Ch-2 fought
route it inverts.
the ground register under the exhalation, the ground-grip, and the violation-legible-on-the-body
mechanic are INVENTED BY THIS SHEET. The naga tana, the ngoéng-de-tana contract, the rousing on
violation, the appeasement, the empo de tana and the darat's child-taking are CITED to SRC_00469 and
SRC_00203.
in a ring following the coil, dry cracks along the arc behind it, the spring running brown. Flat
daylight, no emitted light in frame.
scale gaps.
hitzone_parts EMPTY; phase_trigger, escalation_vector, phase_voice_array EMPTY.T0_Boss_Attack_Rail 0 rows.defender_element Earth here and EMPTY on BE_0002_S1 for what canon says is the same animalunroused. Raised on the CR_0002 sheet as well; it is the same debt seen from the other end.
lookup table with real gameplay consequence and it lives nowhere. T0_Environment_Grammar_Registry
or the quest layer is the likely owner and the registry lane should place it.