assets/boards/flores_island/BRD_0001/CAPTION_ORIGINALS_2026-08-10.json
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"record": "CAPTION_ORIGINALS_2026-08-10",
"board_id": "BRD_0001",
"subject_canon_id": "flores_island",
"content_file": "docs/art_boards/flores_island/BRD_0001/content.json",
"content_file_at_rewrite": "HEAD as of 2026-08-10 (originals read with `git show HEAD:<content_file>`)",
"why": "Josh work-order, handoff 8.15c tail, verbatim: \"Also owed and still open from the night: the six Flores caption refusals blocking the photobook deploy. Clear them properly (captions rewritten, not the gate loosened).\" The six blocks below are the six VISIBLE text blocks the photobook prose gate refused on the published BRD_0001 page: the three Panel A rationales and the three Panel B what_was_amplified fields, which harness/boards/render_board.py::_panel_published() emits as each subject's body. They were rewritten inside the gate's own bar; the FOLD stopgap at render_board.py::_body_block() (commit 6cdb86b3) stays in place as the safety net and no longer catches any of them.",
"gate": {
"module": "harness/site/photobook.py",
"function": "prose_gate",
"limit_name": "VISIBLE_BLOCK_MAX",
"limit_value": 200,
"measured": "plain visible text of one leaf block, after render_board.publishable() and html escaping"
},
"authority": "Content authority is canon: docs/spine/CH_02.md (Asset anchors L231-239, Key sites L83-93, Civilizational marks L54-58, Three-layer surfacing L225-227) and _source/02_Tier_2_Region_Pages/flores_island.md (Section 1 L96-126, Section 5 L509-540, Section 7 L781-797). No fact was invented; the compression drops restatement and qualifiers only, and every dropped clause is recoverable here verbatim and, where named, on the board's own factory surface.",
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"option_id": "A1",
"leaf_path": "panels.A.options[0].rationale",
"original_text": "Flores as its own cosmology holds it: a landscape populated by persons who see us and whom we do not see. The Manggarai name them ata pale-sina, the people on the other side. Every threshold in the frame is addressed — the spring head, the great tree, the doorway, the field's centre-stone — so the eye learns, before a single human speaks, that this island has officials and that the visitor is the one who is unaccounted for.",
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"original_gate_verdict": "REFUSED",
"rewritten_text": "Flores as its cosmology holds it: already populated. The Manggarai name them ata pale-sina, those on the other side. Spring head, tree, doorway and centre-stone are addressed; the visitor is not.",
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"rewritten_gate_verdict": "PASS",
"reason_class": "elaboration_condensed",
"compression_note": "The reading, the Manggarai term with its gloss, and the four addressed thresholds are kept; the 'who see us and whom we do not see' restatement of ata pale-sina, the 'before a single human speaks' staging clause and the 'this island has officials' paraphrase are dropped as restatement. The officials/original-owners doctrine survives in full on the factory surface in this option's own reading_commits_to field."
},
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"option_id": "A2",
"leaf_path": "panels.A.options[1].rationale",
"original_text": "Flores as the Sunda Arc built it and as its people read it: a vertical island. Limestone karst at the bottom where Liang Bua's cool interior sits, monsoon forest on the flank, ash and scree on the Inerie cone, and mineral crater lakes at the top whose colours genuinely shift. The Lio name those lakes by who goes to them, and one of them is Tiwu Ata Polo, the lake of the wicked dead. Altitude is therefore not scenery here, it is a moral topography its own people already read.",
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"original_gate_verdict": "REFUSED",
"rewritten_text": "The Sunda Arc's vertical island: karst at Liang Bua, forest, ash on Inerie, colour-shifting lakes on top. The Lio name one Tiwu Ata Polo, the lake of the wicked dead: altitude is moral ground.",
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"rewritten_gate_verdict": "PASS",
"reason_class": "elaboration_condensed",
"compression_note": "The vertical-island reading, all four altitude bands (karst at Liang Bua, forest, ash on Inerie, colour-shifting lakes on top), the Lio naming, Tiwu Ata Polo and the moral-topography conclusion are kept; the 'cool interior', 'monsoon ... on the flank', 'scree', 'mineral', 'genuinely shift', 'name those lakes by who goes to them' and 'not scenery' qualifiers are compressed. The band-law consequence survives in this option's reading_commits_to."
},
{
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"leaf_path": "panels.A.options[2].rationale",
"original_text": "Flores as its people built it. Settlement radiates from the compang, the communal stone platform-centre, and the lingko lodok fields fan out from it down onto the lower ground — a customary land-tenure and cooperative-irrigation system still worked today, credited to Manggarai adat. Wae Rebo shows the arrangement plainly: seven conical five-storey mbaru niang in a cloud-forest bowl, their fans lying in the valley beneath rather than at the doorstep. The subject of this reading is human-made geometry laid over volcanic slope.",
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"original_gate_verdict": "REFUSED",
"rewritten_text": "Flores as its people built it. Settlement radiates from the compang and the lingko lodok fields fan to the valley floor below, Manggarai adat: customary land tenure and irrigation, worked today.",
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"rewritten_gate_verdict": "PASS",
"reason_class": "elaboration_condensed",
"compression_note": "AMENDED BY CRITIC 2026-08-10 (CRITIC_CAPTIONS_2026-08-10.json, finding F1). The lane's first rewrite dropped the 'customary land-tenure and cooperative-irrigation system' expansion, and that phrase then occurred ZERO times anywhere in content.json -- no plate, no caveat and no adjacent field restored what kind of institution the lingko is. The critic judged it load-bearing on two grounds: this option's own untouched citation_caveat turns on 'the institution actually being drawn', and reading_commits_to cashes the option out as making the Ch-3 land-pressure story legible as damage to the pattern -- land PRESSURE against a land-TENURE system. It is restored as 'customary land tenure and irrigation'. Paid for inside the bar by dropping the 'stone centre' apposition (restored by this option's own third plate, 'The compang centre-stone itself') and the closing 'as Wae Rebo shows' (Wae Rebo occurs 6x elsewhere in content.json, including B3's what_stayed_true), and by 'worked today' for 'still worked today'. Still kept: the people-built reading, the compang, the lingko lodok fan, the valley-floor (not doorstep) placement and the Manggarai adat attribution. Still dropped by design: the 'seven conical five-storey mbaru niang in a cloud-forest bowl' plate-level detail (carried by this option's first plate and by _source/02_Tier_2_Region_Pages/flores_island.md Section 7 L785) and the closing 'human-made geometry laid over volcanic slope' thesis (carried by reading_commits_to)."
},
{
"option_id": "B1",
"leaf_path": "panels.B.options[0].what_was_amplified",
"original_text": "Contrast, air and motion at the addressed points, and nothing else. Swept ground reads as a lighter disc from the ridge above it. A tied cloth is the only moving thing in an otherwise still frame. The spring head holds a column of cooler air made visible by drifting spray. The forest around them is pushed darker and denser so the ordered points sit inside it rather than beside it.",
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"original_gate_verdict": "REFUSED",
"rewritten_text": "Contrast, air and motion at the addressed points, nothing else. Swept ground reads as a lighter disc from the ridge, cool spray hangs at the spring head, a tied cloth moves, the forest is darker.",
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"rewritten_gate_verdict": "PASS",
"reason_class": "elaboration_condensed",
"compression_note": "All four amplified elements are kept in order (swept ground as a lighter disc from the ridge, the cooler air at the spring head, the tied cloth as the only moving thing, the darkened forest); the 'in an otherwise still frame', 'made visible by drifting spray', 'and denser' and 'sit inside it rather than beside it' qualifiers are compressed. The no-new-iconography constraint is untouched in what_stayed_true."
},
{
"option_id": "B2",
"leaf_path": "panels.B.options[1].what_was_amplified",
"original_text": "Compression and tempo. The altitude bands are stacked and heightened so the whole climb from karst mouth to crater rim reads in a single frame. The lakes' colour shift is given a visible rate — it moves over minutes, where in the world it moves over months.",
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"original_visible_len": 257,
"original_gate_verdict": "REFUSED",
"rewritten_text": "Compression and tempo. The altitude bands are stacked so the whole climb from karst mouth to crater rim reads in one frame, and the lakes' colour shift takes minutes where the world takes months.",
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"rewritten_gate_verdict": "PASS",
"reason_class": "elaboration_condensed",
"compression_note": "Compression and tempo, the stacked altitude bands, the single-frame karst-mouth-to-crater-rim climb and the minutes-versus-months rate are all kept; 'and heightened' and the restated 'it moves over ... where in the world it moves over' construction are compressed."
},
{
"option_id": "B3",
"leaf_path": "panels.B.options[2].what_was_amplified",
"original_text": "Density and depth. The lodok fan is extended down the valley to the pre-colonial forest cover the region page already restores by ruling, so the worked ground and the standing forest meet as a real edge rather than as a modern remnant. The Wae Rebo bowl is deepened and given live cloud moving through it.",
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"original_gate_verdict": "REFUSED",
"rewritten_text": "Density and depth. The lodok fan runs down the valley to the restored pre-colonial forest, so worked ground and standing forest meet as a real edge. The Wae Rebo bowl deepens under moving cloud.",
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"rewritten_gate_verdict": "PASS",
"reason_class": "elaboration_condensed",
"compression_note": "Density and depth, the extended lodok fan, the restored pre-colonial forest cover, the real edge between worked ground and standing forest, and the deepened Wae Rebo bowl with live cloud are all kept; 'the region page already restores by ruling' (a provenance clause, held on the factory surface and in altered_law) and 'rather than as a modern remnant' are dropped as restatement. The ruling itself is _source/02_Tier_2_Region_Pages/flores_island.md L122-123."
}
]
}